Maud's internal monologue is ramblier than sues, so if there is a way to still get the maud vibe across in fewer words, that would have helped me. The thing where i started to feel like the book was dragging, for me personally, was we go through the whole scheme again from the other side. I think what waters is doing there is she is putting a high class character and a low class character in a similar like, i'm trapped by what i agreed to do. This is my only option for my own personal liberty and freedom. And show them, you know, back to back with each other like that. It's kind of, it's