The Seven Rules for Writing a Good Introduction

Use active voice put statements in positive form use definite concrete language excuse or plusage prefer verbs to nouns and avoid intensifiers if you do all of these things which by the way usually happen only in revisions yeah right it is hard to write this way first time through you can only do it upon coming back through and cleaning up your ideas so anyway those are my rules for writing if you're interested go get the books man they're super good and I don't think that there are many copies of pro style out there so jump on them fast.