The Bomb Was in My Dick

"Don't ever achieve your dreams otherwise you'll go on fire in space" "Where's the hook here where's the tension where's the story drawing us in?" is a piece of writing advice that can be patronizing to stop at fine or good. We won't ever reach our north star but that's fine because if we did we'd be 433 light years from earth in the middle of a yellow superjarn with a temperature of 6,015 degrees kelvin. The dynamic between the two characters isn't novel or engaging as customer and bartender they both have prescribed roles and are fulfilling them well without any special flair.