The Hybrid of Tone and Character

Maha: I love how he connects these faults faults in tone to faults in character. It feels like the hybridism is a lot more almost antagonistic to the reader whereas pumposity is a much more indifferent to the reader or to the audience. He says there's no point in flunking out of this school before i've given it a whirl maha  i'll tell you what i did last summer i worked in a canning factory every chance i got i sat on my can but um... uh...He says here's an example from a freshman theme and the theme was did right up right up at the paperright as a paragraph talking about what you did last summer