Email Essay Feedback - A Common Mistake

Students emailed me these essays and I was able to provide with them with their scores details what they get on each score. The first mistake is all about the tone. What vocabulary do you choose and how that impacts not just your vocab score for general training task one but also the task score because tone is part of the task score. So the words you choose right impacts both of those scores which seems kind of unfair to me but that's just the way it is.