We're going to get Brenda on the line here. We are a third party electrical maintenance contractor and we work with commercial property managers. And I got to tell you, first impression, it's beautiful. It's a great visual image. You've got very few words on the website. But for the people who are outside of your industry, they're not going to fully understand everything either. So we're going to come at this from a fresh perspective as FTBA team.
Feel like your sales copy falls flat? Join Donald Miller for a conversation with world-renowned copywriting and marketing pro Ray Edwards. You'll discover Ray's six-part formula for writing persuasive sales copy, including one critical element most people overlook. Skip it, and watch your sales tank. If you want to dramatically improve your sales letters, email campaigns, pitches, and landing pages, don't miss this episode!
Visit http://buildingastorybrand.com/6 to get an unedited version of the interview with Ray Edwards, along with a video of Don's website critique.