The Mystic Magic of Hepsuban

I think that they could have led into a little bit more, but I think maybe she's at the end, maybe try. Reading from paragraph to paragraph, I am, uh, very comfortable with her writing. She's got a lovely way of writing and it is all about children being brought into an adult world that is not a safe place. It feels like bottom just almost does that and then doesn't. So yeah, maybe it's just a little bit inconsistent on there.