How to Write Better or Funnier

i try to write several emales in a row. I feel like they get better as i write, like sharpen the saw by doing it all at once second. One important thing is that, can i draw a picture of this sentence? A lot of times when i am really cracking up about something, it's because i have a mental image in my brain about it. Even if you're serious, you want to have as many concrete, specific details as possible and not abstractions. And them words to watch out for, like id. Those are supereasy to ma, more exciting and just easy opportunities. Do you have any more? You prive 90 of em.