Writing or Just Pretending? When there is Zero Flow and Everything is $h*t
Story Grid Writing Podcast
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The Narrative Device of a Police Report
"I can tell that you're bored with this. And that's okay because I think we're all getting bored with it," he says to the audience. "What we've been trying to do is to induce your changes without any sort of clear messaging of what we mean by what were what changes we want." He then goes back and rewrites his trope in order to be having very clear that Dawson wanted the man to leave, but couldn't directly tell the guy to leave because he was a witness. Watson wanted to interview him but needed Dawson's permission to actually do the interview. So now they have conflicting wants which I didn't have in the trope last week.
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