I've Written Three Essays, but None Have Passed 60

i've written three essays, but none of them have passed 60. So i've got 57, 54 and 58. Shows i'm struggling each time. There just seems to be different problems or issues. I can imagine youare using yes and no in a sort of rhetori way. You're saying, so is this something that we should blobbe about? Bobboba, that's not that bad. Have you been told about that as someone like, crossed it out with a red pen or something?