
Getting the Protagonist Right: When and How to Switch the Main Character
Story Grid Writing Podcast
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The Shift Isn't Coming Off
In this scene, the detective walks over and starts to engage the witness. When i read your draft, i can tell that you are trying to shift to randall, but the the shift isn't coming off. This is what mean about it being uncomfortable. We need to create that space for there to be some weirdness. Let's take a look at how you handled thi switch off, tim.
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