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The Relationship Between Garth and Zed
Garth was standing behind a mahogany desk that spanned nearly the width of the carriage, bare, except for a pair of beeswax candles. The sentence has gone on so long you're having to make up aliases for him to keep from repeating yourself. I appreciate the specificity right, the mentions of mahogany and ivory give a sense of opulence. Mahogany is better than wooden. It has a tone, but you need to pick your battle, Zed. Give us the single rich telling detail.