You Get a Future?

A house a dad's going to be crashing our house for a few days while my housemate is in Mexico. This man has recently gotten into making DIY music videos for himself. Thankfully, the music video wasn't terrible but it's clearly DIY and mostly shots of his face at different angles. The dad is just coming for this because his daughter, she ain't there. He's not visiting his little shnookums. He's there to see if he's given too much guitar face and if he needs to turn up the tramp-o. Brothers, what would you do if your friends dad, who did no super well, ask for feedback on his music video?