How to Write a Book That Moves the Story Along

If I included everything, this would be like an 800-page book. My whole goal when I write these kinds of books is to keep it fast-paced. So yeah, there's always editorial choices where I have to cut. There were more dates Rebecca went on that I didn't mean for it. And they're funny. But if it makes me laugh, I feel like, okay, it's gonna make somebody else laugh. so I don't like cutting the funnies, but I had to.