The Importance of Coldness

My website timclairpo.co.uk this piece is untitled and it's by Raja the first thing Girthana felt was the cold she had felt it before spending winters in northern India makes one used to the cold  this was different it wasn't like the cold you feel when you step outside on a snowy day no this was different it was slow and deliberate before you know it you're shivering and pressing your hands between your thighs I can't remember the last time you swore like that sis a familiar voice called out to her okay here's my suggestions the first line you name the protagonist the language is simple and you end with the most interesting word cold oh it's