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Devan Sandiford: "Words Matter"

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How to Make the Story Shorter

The most important thing is not that he tells his son but that he decides to tell his son And I think it makes the story shorter. He's really chosen the absolute right place to end that story So other than what you said about the humors or anything else you'd change? I have three small things for him The first one is do you remember when the cops start showing up One after the other after the other. It just lays them all out a little too quickly for me and without any sort of drama so I'd I'd build in a little drama there.

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