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Barns Is Not Barns
There are still signal problems in this for me. The barns it's still not clear. Barns is barns is intentions in in the in the text or do not come through. And also the non-sequitur questions that come like the question doesn't it seem weird to you? That's kind of like that's a clam. So all right so those are signals that need to be clarified. Also barns is not barns. Dawson's role still seems a little bit like he's not involved in the corruption. It as Leslie was talking and occurred to me oh wait a minute perhaps Dawson is part of the bad crew in the precinct. Maybe he's aligned with the
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