The Importance of Personalization in Academic Writing

"We should be trying to make a try to put people into our sentences as opposed to impersonal things in our sentences," he says. "It takes a little more forethought it takes a bigger verb vocabulary and it almost takes a little bit more creativity right like the drug would be lethal if swallowed is okay but this drug would kill any 100 pound teenager that took it is like whoa all of a sudden you know some poor 15 year old girl."