John welcomes back Christina Hodson (The Flash, Bumblebee) to ask, how do you to construct a great action sequence? Using examples from three different movies, they discuss what good action looks like on the page, how to keep your reader from getting bored or confused, and why production can sometimes blow your plans to smithereens.

Then it’s a round of How Would This be a Movie?, where we take four stories from the news and pitch how we might adapt them for the screen. Stories include a mysterious painting, a train trapped in a blizzard, a teen who sued his parents, and zombie colleges.

We also follow up on director’s chairs and mammograms, and answer listener questions on side characters and creating a healthy work/life balance.

In our bonus segment for premium members, John and Christina examine the do’s and don’ts of introducing yourself to a stranger through email.

Links:

Christina Hodson
That New York Times article with John and Christina
Bamboo Director’s Chair
Birdigo on Steam
Action samples: Aliens, The Bourne Identity and Rise of the Planet of the Apes
David Koepp’s Jurassic Park screenplay
David Benioff’s Troy screenplay
A Man of Parts and Learning by Fara Dabhoiwala
When a Deadly Winter Storm Trapped a Luxury Passenger Train Near the Donner Pass for Three Days by Robert Klara
A U.K. Teen’s Parents Sent Him to Ghana. He Took Them to Court. by Lynsey Chutel
Zombie colleges? These universities are living another life online, and no one can say why by Chris Quintana
Mike Birbiglia
The Onion in print
Padraic Murphy’s Research Department
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Craig Mazin on Threads and Instagram
John August on Bluesky, Threads, and Instagram
Outro by Vance Kotrla (send us yours!)
Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

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