DZ-73: Selling documents - Development Tools 3
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How to Write a Screenplay in 20 Pages
When you write such a like detailed treatment, what the readers then start to think about is what's not in the treatment rather than being invited into go what's the experience of this. And one of the things that you've done here is have too much detail. You're not taking the audience through a kind of a crafted literary journey or literally taken by seeing from the story. So I would say you pull back on the detail and in terms of technical stuff, when it comes to treatment writing, we really aware that detail at the kind of most forensic level is problematic. Beware of adjectives and adverts, you know, and it's just about compressive and boiling it down in the
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