Is This Market Watch Quality?

i've always tried to avoid my nar content to extent possible, try to avoid them being too bloggy. And i would just kind of look at it, i say, you now, does this feel like what i would see on market watch? Or does this feels like what I would see on business insider? Or is this a bloggy? If that's the case, i would just try to kind of edit, you don't edit that out. It's tough. But sometimes with under performing content, you know, you have to update it.