Bethel Was Not a Killer as Part of Her Self Identity

i was wondering if it would be any different if the sentence didn't include the words, as part of her self identity. It could get to the right place if it kept walking, yes, quite a thing. That's not the worst framing for it. Like, you know, she, she's trying is just a, yes, whole thing. This was just something i kind of wanted to get your opinion on.