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The Negative Formalization of a Scene
You're doing a negative formulation and a simile similes are already asking the reader to stand outside the narrative and imagine something else before jumping back in. The instant inevitable effect is to link you subliminally with the unpleasant behavior despite the fact you explicitly instructed the listener not to do so no this was different same as I said before you're repeating yourself only now your narrator is literally saying noI suspect subconsciously you already realized this wasn't working and so you've dropped little messages to yourself within the story it was slow and deliberate and before you know it you're shivering and pressing your hands between your thighs like on a snowy day right because the human body doesn't change temperature immediately which