How to Remember the Past Few Hours

Don't give us details that encourage us to see your viewpoint character externally and also that repetition of face in the sentence clangs a little bit. neither but then he who chases a rabbit usually doesn't catch it either rabbits are fucking fast don't chase rabbits is the lesson here they have enough shit to deal with without you hassling them. even if you caught one what would you do with it you just be holding a distressed rabbit Guillotana lifted her face off the floor her dark hair falling over her face as she took in the room around her so you spent so long farting about trying to give us the exact temperature and degrees Kelvin that you've forgotten to tell us that