The Big Pet Peave - I Don't Know What's Going on in a Book

Big pet peave is not explaining, especially if it's something that you've made up. No description about her features when she the was but it reamed more like she hadn't shifted. A big peppy of mine is inpo dumping. The beginning fom blo and ash was hard for me to get through because it wa so much info dumpingthat i'm like, how am i supposed to care? I don't care. Let's tell it when i don't get much else in the plot. And just inpho dump of the world before or protagonist, or wherever we are in the book. Thats something like form from blood and ash. Love it.