How to Write a Good Story

Your story, your article has to have the least number of names and numbers. You know how you feel when you read a novel and then suddenly Christine, Chris, Mark and Joanne and Francesca all show up in quick succession. Now let's make it really hard for you by bringing in Raghunat or Sivarama Krishnan who is from Thirubvananthapuram. It confuses your reader and it's irrelevant. In Jonathan's story he didn't just put in all those details of numbers and names but then he did the, I did this and I did that as well.