The Problem Space in the Story of Randal and the Detectives

"I don't see how randall is using the people in the story, the detectives, as iits. He's treating them as he is just sort of like a stranger in a strange land, and he doesn't know the game." "The problem space here is that every one is treating everyone else as i it, and they never start to transform into a thou perspectives," says author Daniel Obeidallah. 'That's my global gestalt of what i think will make this story from hey pretty good'