A Log Line That Leans a Lot in the First Act

i'm about to share with you a bunch of log line examples that with really strong idea s that just need editing. So what we talked about before was, can we add a little bit to bring out more detail, or get to the hook, or give some examples? Here's another example. Column higgins writes young adult honey discovers that she and her parents are werewolves,. She goes against their demands for secrecy and risks being shunned from werewolf society in order to figure out who is hunting their kind.