The First Thing You Have to Do After You've Experienced a Story

The first thing i do is get a feeling. And so i tried to rewrite it where the crisis, there was a clear moment where the crisis sat on his shoulders about what to do. So that's what i did. Ah, it took me, i don't know, id probably worked on it every day for light nine or ten days, ah, to get to the version that i liked well enough to send it over to you. I'm just going to give you the gestalt of what came to me, and then we can take it from there.